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Bly never liked the waves, not even so much as the waves as the ocean. He was only at the beach today because of the sun felt nice aginst his skin, and the sand felt soft under his feet. But that wasn't the only reason for comming to the beach, he couldn't shake the feeling of lonilyness. What other place has as many good looking guy, and all of them with their shirts off. He scanned the beach carrying his folding chair looking for a place to sit, but the beach was crouded and almost no was free. Except one spot, there was a guy next to it, he was smaller and defently not as muscular a Bly. But he was dephently a cute one, Bly made his way over to where he was. As he got closer he saw that he was alone, a book in hand as his eyes scanned the pages taking in every word. "Is this seat taken?" he pointed to the empty spot. The guy looked up with soft eyes from his book, smiling "Not at all," Bly set up his chair next to his. Bly tried to find a topic to talk of, he felt a little nervous but swallowed it down "So, what are you reading?" The guy next to him flashed him the cover showing him the tittle "It's a romance novel." Bly smiled reconising the tittle of the book, he had once read it himself "Isn't that a homo-erectic novel?" Bly teased, unable to hide his grin of pleasure. "Well someone knows their literature. I'm Neko, it's nice to meet you." Neko extended his hand to him "I'm Bly," he extended his hand to shake Neko's "it's nice to meet someone with the same taste in books." Neko smiled happily at his new friend, he place a marker on his page and set it in his bag "Care to go for a walk down the beach, Bly?" Bly tried to hide his smile and excitement as he stood and followed Neko down the beach. They walked most of the afternoon, they stoped once to get lunch together. They sat accross from eachother and never ran out of conversation. The sun was starting to go down, the sky turned a bright orange color. They say back at their seats watching the sun go down, Bly felt something grasp his hand. When he looked down, it was Neko's hand warm, and soft. He looked up and saw Neko smiling at him, his soft eyes were shining. As the last of the sun was starting to dissappear behind the horizen Neko leanded in close to Bly. Bly closed his eyes and leaned into Neko, he felt him press his lips aginst his. You know that spark people alway are talking about, thats how this kiss felt. As if there were fire works going off in the background and doves flying around them. When he opened his eyes the sun had left, but when he saw Neko's face he knew that he felt that spark as well. "When can i see you again?" Neko leaned in close to his ear "Would you like to stay at my place tonight?" Bly looked up at him, his eyes lit up bright. Neko didn't give him time to answer, he grabed his hand and let him to one of the houses on the beach. This one was one of the larger ones, Neko pushed the door open and pulled him in. It looked much bigger from the inside "Wow this place looks great." Neko blushed at Bly's words "It gets a little lonely though could really use someone else around, maybe a lover. Who knows."
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A cold breeze aginst his naked body woke Bly from his sleep. He could hear the sounds of the ocean from the bed. He looked to his side to see Neko with his arms around him still naked as well after last nights acounts. The floor was covered with the bits and peices of their wordrobe. Bly leaned in close to Neko and kissed his cheek and wispered in his ear "I'll never leave you, Neko. Never."
The End
im sry its so short, this is a story of Bly :icondarkwolf-zx: character and my character Neko



Neko: Danny i still love you
XD
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:icontechmoginger4eves:
TechmoGinger4eves Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconpervplz: That was awesome! I love it!
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darkwolf-zx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
What do you think of Bly?
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:icontechmoginger4eves:
TechmoGinger4eves Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
he's cool!
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:icondarkwolf-zx:
darkwolf-zx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Bly: why do you think I'm cool?
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balsa123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
XD im glad you think so ^^
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darkwolf-zx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
You are one amazing writer. I would have made a story for on here myself but I'm working on a story for a national contest
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balsa123 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
do you have a fave part???
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:icondarkwolf-zx:
darkwolf-zx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I love it all so much its hard to pick
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:iconbalsa123:
balsa123 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
lol glad you like it


(what country are you in)
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darkwolf-zx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I'm in the USA
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